Double Page Spread Title Analysis
As I found out from my draft feedback, I need to change the title of my heading for the double page spread; I need to change this because just having the band name "Double ii" as the title is not effective or fitting to the conventions of a professional magazine. In order to change this I have brainstormed ideas:
Me, You & Double ii
Me, Myself & Double ii
An i for an i
ii's To Speak The Truth
More Than Meets The ii's
More To Double ii Than Meets The Eye
Let Double ii Flash Before Your Eyes
Double ii, Flashing Before Your Eyes
Inside Double ii
ii's Are The Mirror Of The Soul
A Look Into The Soul Of Double ii
To See All The Words Within Double ii
Double ii, Looking The World Straight In The Eye
Get Lost In Double ii
To brainstorm these ideas of headings I focussed on well known quotes and saying surrounding eyes as the double i "ii" sound within the band name link to this. I looked at phrases such as "me, myself and I" which is currently a lyric and title of a song by G-Eazy ft Bebe Rexha. I decided not to use these ideas as G-Eazy is not a artist of my indie pop genre which could have confused my audiences. I then looked at the quote "An eye for an eye" however this has a Biblical origin which may put off some audiences and not seem very modern. My next idea was linked to the idea of the saying that your eyes speak the truth, I decided not to use this as my audiences could find this too far fetched and unrealistic. The next phrase I considered was how "life flashes before your eyes" however I felt this could have negative connotations. The final quote I took possible inspiration from was "eyes are the mirror to your soul" however I found that my audience might find these ideas too fanatical and this would not accurately show the nature of my article. The rest of my ides were made up from other eye related information and twists on other phrases. I chose to name my article "More Than Meets The Eye" which was the idea I was most happy with from my planning. This heading makes a really nice link to my band name of "Double ii" and will hopefully encourage audiences to read my article as this creates a semantic field of revealing unknown information. This heading came from the inspiration of the common phrase of "more to something than meets the eye" as this slight intertextuality will also appeal to and engage my modern audiences.
Me, You & Double ii
Me, Myself & Double ii
An i for an i
ii's To Speak The Truth
More Than Meets The ii's
More To Double ii Than Meets The Eye
Let Double ii Flash Before Your Eyes
Double ii, Flashing Before Your Eyes
Inside Double ii
ii's Are The Mirror Of The Soul
A Look Into The Soul Of Double ii
To See All The Words Within Double ii
Double ii, Looking The World Straight In The Eye
Get Lost In Double ii
To brainstorm these ideas of headings I focussed on well known quotes and saying surrounding eyes as the double i "ii" sound within the band name link to this. I looked at phrases such as "me, myself and I" which is currently a lyric and title of a song by G-Eazy ft Bebe Rexha. I decided not to use these ideas as G-Eazy is not a artist of my indie pop genre which could have confused my audiences. I then looked at the quote "An eye for an eye" however this has a Biblical origin which may put off some audiences and not seem very modern. My next idea was linked to the idea of the saying that your eyes speak the truth, I decided not to use this as my audiences could find this too far fetched and unrealistic. The next phrase I considered was how "life flashes before your eyes" however I felt this could have negative connotations. The final quote I took possible inspiration from was "eyes are the mirror to your soul" however I found that my audience might find these ideas too fanatical and this would not accurately show the nature of my article. The rest of my ides were made up from other eye related information and twists on other phrases. I chose to name my article "More Than Meets The Eye" which was the idea I was most happy with from my planning. This heading makes a really nice link to my band name of "Double ii" and will hopefully encourage audiences to read my article as this creates a semantic field of revealing unknown information. This heading came from the inspiration of the common phrase of "more to something than meets the eye" as this slight intertextuality will also appeal to and engage my modern audiences.
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